Hi Roxy I like the way you started with an I at the start of you sentences. Next step please use a different colour for your words because you can't see pink over top of pink. Antonia
Hi Roxy, I like how you made it colorful. Next step you could make the words a different colour because they blend in with the background. From Estella
Hi Roxy
ReplyDeleteI like the way you started with an I at the start of you sentences.
Next step please use a different colour for your words because you can't see pink over top of pink.
Antonia
Hi Roxy,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made it colorful.
Next step you could make the words a different colour because they blend in with the background.
From Estella
Hi Roxy I like the way that
ReplyDeleteyou talked about what you like doing.
Next time you could talk
more about things that you
like.
Thanks Eva
Thank you for that information i will do better next time
ReplyDeleteThank you for that information i will do better next time
ReplyDeleteThank you for that information i will do better next time
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