Every Monday morning we do free writing for 20 minutes. We can write about anything we want.
Adrenalin Park : )
Early Saturday morning I woke up around 6:30 and ended up going for a run. After that run I went to my nana's house to get ready to go to the Adrenalin Park. While we were at my nans house we were all waiting for the Sliders, Sliders are pretty much mini burgers which are really delicious. The Sliders were then finished and made so we made our way into the vehicles and had an upbeat ride especially with the music. In the car we were all hyped and singing really loud, had the speaker turned all the way up and could not wait until we arrived. When we arrived we all jumped out of the excited to go for a swim and have a turn on the challenging obstacles. My aunty had already booked in and had a spot reserved for where we'll be sitting. We took our gear down to where our spot was reserved got our life jackets on and jumped straight in. When we jumped in it was really cold but then we all got used to it and jumped on the obstacle. On the obstacle were a couple of slides the first one was really fun and then we got to this bit where we started bombing. While we're bombing heaps of others started to bomb as well and our manu's were going high as ( a manu is when your jumping backwards kind of in v shape/u shape. ) After a couple of hours we ended up jumping out and getting a feed.
This place sounds like an awesome place to visit! Maybe a picture of it would help others see how awesome it is. I like that you have tried to use higher lever vocabulary and sequenced your events logically. Maybe next time try to focus on one moment in time, e.g. climbing up the stairs of the slide, to landing in the water. You will be surprised how much detail you can write about such a short moment.
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