Saturday 3 September 2016

Learn more about me

If you wanted to learn more about me here's a few facts about me at home and at school 
Hope you like it

6 comments:

  1. Hi Roxy
    I like the way you started with an I at the start of you sentences.
    Next step please use a different colour for your words because you can't see pink over top of pink.
    Antonia

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  2. Hi Roxy,
    I like how you made it colorful.
    Next step you could make the words a different colour because they blend in with the background.
    From Estella

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  3. Hi Roxy I like the way that
    you talked about what you like doing.
    Next time you could talk
    more about things that you
    like.
    Thanks Eva

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  4. Thank you for that information i will do better next time

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  5. Thank you for that information i will do better next time

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  6. Thank you for that information i will do better next time

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